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FadingSundown
Messages : 19 Join date : 2013-11-01 Location : Netherlands
| Subject: Feedback/Beta Mon Nov 04, 2013 7:23 pm | |
| Hey hey all :), I dont know if this is the right place to post this, or if it is even allowed ><, but I was wondering if anyone feels like giving me feedback on a project I recently started. It is far from done (I think i not even have 2 minutes from the almost 4 minutes I want to make), but im curious to what you think if it up till now. A week ago I decided to try complete it for Akross. It wont win anything or end up high, but if some people like it than im already happy. So if you want to give me feedback (just once is okay, unless you want me to keep you updated the whole way :O) send me an PM :). I trust that if I you're interested and I send you an PM with the download link you wont go upload it somewhere and make me sad :(. PS. If anyone wants to 'trade' feedback or something of the like, im totally in for it. I love giving feedback ;). | |
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xShiroy Admin
Messages : 245 Join date : 2013-10-21 Age : 27 Location : Portugal
| Subject: Re: Feedback/Beta Mon Nov 04, 2013 9:49 pm | |
| this is the right place :DDD
post the video we'll be pleased to give a feedback <3 | |
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Replay Studios Æ Member
Messages : 571 Join date : 2013-10-17 Age : 36
| Subject: Re: Feedback/Beta Mon Nov 04, 2013 10:10 pm | |
| i'll give feedback as well ^^ | |
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gabberMD Admin
Messages : 723 Join date : 2013-10-14 Age : 32 Location : Italy
| Subject: Re: Feedback/Beta Mon Nov 04, 2013 10:22 pm | |
| sure | |
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Luna
Messages : 307 Join date : 2013-10-18 Age : 31 Location : Paris France
| Subject: Re: Feedback/Beta Tue Nov 05, 2013 1:08 am | |
| yup i would like to see too :) | |
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FadingSundown
Messages : 19 Join date : 2013-11-01 Location : Netherlands
| Subject: Re: Feedback/Beta Tue Nov 05, 2013 1:21 pm | |
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[madaraxD] Admin
Messages : 107 Join date : 2013-10-12 Age : 29 Location : Argentina
| Subject: Re: Feedback/Beta Wed Nov 06, 2013 6:09 am | |
| If im not late i would like to see it as well <_< | |
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xShiroy Admin
Messages : 245 Join date : 2013-10-21 Age : 27 Location : Portugal
| Subject: Re: Feedback/Beta Wed Nov 06, 2013 2:05 pm | |
| so, I think in the 0:33 when it passes from a Fast scene to a slow one, you could make sth to give it more dynamics, Like adding a flash at the end of the fast scene to the begining of the slow one, adding some kind of movement in the slow one in the begining too same to some others scenes, when someone's drawning and then the scene changes to the girl watching the wolf on the bridge thing, you could also add some movement Cuz it's happening all the time, like, SLOW, FAST, SLOW, FAST with the SAME pace XD And that gets kinda, not dynamic x) I really think it's good, just lacks at dynamic :) also at 1:57 ~ I wouldn't use the same scenes over and over xDDD cuz gets a little repetitive for a while Apart from that, idk what more to tell you : o, Im not used to that style so yeah Just improve those if you want, you'll see it will come out much better :D GL! | |
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FadingSundown
Messages : 19 Join date : 2013-11-01 Location : Netherlands
| Subject: Re: Feedback/Beta Wed Nov 06, 2013 4:07 pm | |
| - Quote xShiroy:
- xShiroy wrote:
- so, I think in the 0:33 when it passes from a Fast scene to a slow one, you could make sth to give it more dynamics,
Like adding a flash at the end of the fast scene to the begining of the slow one, adding some kind of movement in the slow one in the begining too
same to some others scenes, when someone's drawning and then the scene changes to the girl watching the wolf on the bridge thing, you could also add some movement
Cuz it's happening all the time, like, SLOW, FAST, SLOW, FAST with the SAME pace XD And that gets kinda, not dynamic x)
I really think it's good, just lacks at dynamic :)
also at 1:57 ~ I wouldn't use the same scenes over and over xDDD cuz gets a little repetitive for a while
Apart from that, idk what more to tell you : o, Im not used to that style so yeah
Just improve those if you want, you'll see it will come out much better :D GL!
Thank you for your feedback! Yeah, it should be more dynamic xD. Actually I got this pm from Danilo yesterday; - Quote gabberMD:
- gabberMD wrote:
- well song+anime fit really cool but the big problem is really too static
like need some zoom, moviments and some lights. Btw i don't know this anime/movie so i can't understand well the story :/ at 36sec some glitch effect for the sound ill be cool nway my advice is make some moviments etc like i tell u before or ill be really static
So I am already working on adding more movement to make it more dynamic :). I really dont want to create a sequence of motionless clips ;(. At 1:57 I agree with you, I have to search for other clips I could mix in there. Im grateful for your feedback, thank you :D. The other feedback I received so far is from Replay. I am going to tone down the color correction at his advice. It is too strong and bleaches too much, that is not extremely hard to fix (but hard to do right for me). Im still quite new to this kind or color correction so I find that I easily make it too strong >_<. - Color Correction as it is now:
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Luna
Messages : 307 Join date : 2013-10-18 Age : 31 Location : Paris France
| Subject: Re: Feedback/Beta Wed Nov 06, 2013 10:22 pm | |
| i agree with that, the color correction looks better now also it's too slow for me and something is missing like i can easily watch but it's not something i could watch again and again, it's not keeping my attention, i don't know if it's because of the song or not
but good luck and keep it up :) | |
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[madaraxD] Admin
Messages : 107 Join date : 2013-10-12 Age : 29 Location : Argentina
| Subject: Re: Feedback/Beta Fri Nov 08, 2013 2:41 am | |
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JazzsVids
Messages : 73 Join date : 2013-10-17 Age : 30 Location : USA
| Subject: Re: Feedback/Beta Wed Nov 13, 2013 1:19 am | |
| Next time, instead of PM, I think it would be best for you to just post the link here in the thread. | |
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gabberMD Admin
Messages : 723 Join date : 2013-10-14 Age : 32 Location : Italy
| Subject: Re: Feedback/Beta Wed Nov 13, 2013 12:22 pm | |
| - JazzsVids wrote:
- Next time, instead of PM, I think it would be best for you to just post the link here in the thread.
yeah | |
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FadingSundown
Messages : 19 Join date : 2013-11-01 Location : Netherlands
| Subject: Re: Feedback/Beta Wed Nov 13, 2013 8:49 pm | |
| - JazzsVids wrote:
- Next time, instead of PM, I think it would be best for you to just post the link here in the thread.
Ah well, since it will be my entry for akross, I prefer not placing any links online ><. | |
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