Yoredet - Sword Art Online

Yeah, like I said in the description any tips would be appreciated I'm starting to not improve much and I want to put an end to that.

Anyways;

Old school song  

Video looks good, i enjoy it. Be sure to remove or hide the water-mark on next videos because you can be disqualified on a contest because of the water-mark (and also because it has nothing to do there xD)
Then your shakes are kinda strong and you repeat them a lot, try to find another way to mark the beats of the song.. not always with a shake. Then your masking can be better, specialy that kirito mask at 0:29.
But anyway i really enjoy the video, i remember hearing this song a lot! and your video goes really well with it.
Keep it up , hope to see another video from you soon

xDieguitoAMV wrote:

Old school song  

Video looks good, i enjoy it. Be sure to remove or hide the water-mark on next videos because you can be disqualified on a contest because of the water-mark (and also because it has nothing to do there xD)
Then your shakes are kinda strong and you repeat them a lot, try to find another way to mark the beats of the song.. not always with a shake. Then your masking can be better, specialy that kirito mask at 0:29.
But anyway i really enjoy the video, i remember hearing this song a lot! and your video goes really well with it.
Keep it up , hope to see another video from you soon

Thanks for the feedback, is the watermark really that important? It seems like a waste to crop the video for the sake of that type of watermark. I agree with you on the shake thing, i've been trying to make them stronger because I think they look weak but it's probably just because there are shakes everywhere xD but it seems so plain without them to me.

Anyways, thanks again :)

agree with Diego =)

for the watemark if you don't want to zoom try with blur because are annoying too!

gabberMD wrote:

agree with Diego =)

for the watemark if you don't want to zoom try with blur because are annoying too!

Hmm... never thought about blurring it, good idea :)

Diego Said it all XD
Keep it up  

ExilesAMVs wrote:

Thanks for the feedback, is the watermark really that important? It seems like a waste to crop the video for the sake of that type of watermark. I agree with you on the shake thing, i've been trying to make them stronger because I think they look weak but it's probably just because there are shakes everywhere xD but it seems so plain without them to me.

Download Blurays! haha what the other guys said basically. Try experimenting those shakes more and more. You're getting there. :3 Good video too. ^^

ya, next time try to have cleaner footage (logo) ~ but great job ^^

xDreww wrote:

Download Blurays!

well ofc lol about zoom and blur is a method for lazy people ;D

I'll have a search around on Nyaa xD, Thanks guys.

Imo it needs more impact, its like after the slow part at the beggining it didnt changed (and the song became fast) and you used too much the same transition sometimes, but yeah overall is quite good orz

ExilesAMVs wrote:

I'll have a search around on Nyaa xD, Thanks guys.

If you cant search for bluray, you can try horriblesub. They usually release episode that do not have watermarks.

About the vid
The clip selections were good specially on the chorus part, if only you speed it up more a bit. and I agree with [madaraxD] that you only have one pacing, try to listen more to the song rhythm  for you to determine the pacing.

keep it up

Katzie wrote:

keep it up

ahaha Kat seems more a threat  

gabberMD wrote:

Katzie wrote:

keep it up

ahaha Kat seems more a threat  

I was thinking about this

When you are talking about "only having one pace" I'm not sure what you mean. I just follow sync points could you try to explain that a bit more? :)

I think i watch a thousand AMVs with this song.. xD
DBZ/Yoredet haha xD
Anyway the video is pretty nice. ^^