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FadingSundown

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PostSubject: Feedback/Beta   Feedback/Beta Watch11Mon Nov 04, 2013 7:23 pm

Hey hey all :),

I dont know if this is the right place to post this, or if it is even allowed ><, but I was wondering if anyone feels like giving me feedback on a project I recently started. It is far from done (I think i not even have 2 minutes from the almost 4 minutes I want to make), but im curious to what you think if it up till now.

A week ago I decided to try complete it for Akross. It wont win anything or end up high, but if some people like it than im already happy. So if you want to give me feedback (just once is okay, unless you want me to keep you updated the whole way :O) send me an PM :).


I trust that if I you're interested and I send you an PM with the download link you wont go upload it somewhere and make me sad :(.
Crying or Very sad


PS. If anyone wants to 'trade' feedback or something of the like, im totally in for it. I love giving feedback ;).
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PostSubject: Re: Feedback/Beta   Feedback/Beta Watch11Mon Nov 04, 2013 9:49 pm

this is the right place :DDD

post the video we'll be pleased to give a feedback <3


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PostSubject: Re: Feedback/Beta   Feedback/Beta Watch11Mon Nov 04, 2013 10:10 pm

i'll give feedback as well ^^
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PostSubject: Re: Feedback/Beta   Feedback/Beta Watch11Mon Nov 04, 2013 10:22 pm

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PostSubject: Re: Feedback/Beta   Feedback/Beta Watch11Tue Nov 05, 2013 1:08 am

yup i would like to see too :)
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PostSubject: Re: Feedback/Beta   Feedback/Beta Watch11Tue Nov 05, 2013 1:21 pm

I have PM'd you all ^_^!
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PostSubject: Re: Feedback/Beta   Feedback/Beta Watch11Wed Nov 06, 2013 6:09 am

If im not late i would like to see it as well <_<


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PostSubject: Re: Feedback/Beta   Feedback/Beta Watch11Wed Nov 06, 2013 2:05 pm

so, I think in the 0:33 when it passes from a Fast scene to a slow one, you could make sth to give it more dynamics,

Like adding a flash at the end of the fast scene to the begining of the slow one, adding some kind of movement in the slow one in the begining too

same to some others scenes, when someone's drawning and then the scene changes to the girl watching the wolf on the bridge thing, you could also add some movement

Cuz it's happening all the time, like, SLOW, FAST, SLOW, FAST with the SAME pace XD
And that gets kinda, not dynamic x)

I really think it's good, just lacks at dynamic :)

also at 1:57 ~ I wouldn't use the same scenes over and over xDDD cuz gets a little repetitive for a while

Apart from that, idk what more to tell you : o, Im not used to that style so yeah

Just improve those if you want, you'll see it will come out much better :D
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PostSubject: Re: Feedback/Beta   Feedback/Beta Watch11Wed Nov 06, 2013 4:07 pm

Quote xShiroy:
 

Thank you for your feedback! Yeah, it should be more dynamic xD. Actually I got this pm from Danilo yesterday;

Quote gabberMD:
 

So I am already working on adding more movement to make it more dynamic :). I really dont want to create a sequence of motionless clips ;(.
At 1:57 I agree with you, I have to search for other clips I could mix in there. Im grateful for your feedback, thank you :D.

The other feedback I received so far is from Replay. I am going to tone down the color correction at his advice. It is too strong and bleaches too much, that is not extremely hard to fix (but hard to do right for me). Im still quite new to this kind or color correction so I find that I easily make it too strong >_<.

Color Correction as it is now:
 
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PostSubject: Re: Feedback/Beta   Feedback/Beta Watch11Wed Nov 06, 2013 10:22 pm

i agree with that, the color correction looks better now
also it's too slow for me and something is missing like i can easily watch but it's not something i could watch again and again, it's not keeping my attention, i don't know if it's because of the song or not

but good luck and keep it up :)
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PostSubject: Re: Feedback/Beta   Feedback/Beta Watch11Fri Nov 08, 2013 2:41 am

Answered by pm :3


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PostSubject: Re: Feedback/Beta   Feedback/Beta Watch11Wed Nov 13, 2013 1:19 am

Next time, instead of PM, I think it would be best for you to just post the link here in the thread.
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PostSubject: Re: Feedback/Beta   Feedback/Beta Watch11Wed Nov 13, 2013 12:22 pm

JazzsVids wrote:
Next time, instead of PM, I think it would be best for you to just post the link here in the thread.
yeah xD 


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PostSubject: Re: Feedback/Beta   Feedback/Beta Watch11Wed Nov 13, 2013 8:49 pm

JazzsVids wrote:
Next time, instead of PM, I think it would be best for you to just post the link here in the thread.
Ah well, since it will be my entry for akross, I prefer not placing any links online ><.
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